Overview
This 50-minute session aims to develop Year 10 students’ ability to analyse language effectively in preparation for English Language Paper 1, Question 2 (language analysis). Using an extract featuring George and Lennie from Of Mice and Men, students will explore key language methods, infer meaning, and begin to write concise analytical responses.
This lesson aligns with the National Curriculum for England (English Programmes of Study, Years 9-11), focusing on explicitly developing linguistic analysis skills as required for GCSE English Language assessment criteria.
National Curriculum Links
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Reading – comprehension and critical analysis:
Pupils should be taught to:
- “Understand and analyse the language, structure and form of texts, including literary texts, and use relevant textual evidence.”
(English Programme of Study - KS4 Reading)
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Writing – composition and effect:
Pupils should be taught to:
- “Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.”
(English Programme of Study - KS4 Writing)
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Assessment focus for KS4 English Language Paper 1, Question 2:
Analyse how writers use language to create effects and influence readers.
Learning Objectives
By the end of the session, students will be able to:
- Identify key language techniques (e.g., similes, metaphors, alliteration, emotive language) in an extract from Of Mice and Men.
- Explain the effect of specific language choices on the reader’s understanding and emotions.
- Write a focused paragraph analysing language, with explicit textual references.
Resources Needed
- Printed copies of a carefully selected 150-200 word extract featuring George and Lennie from Of Mice and Men
- Whiteboard and markers
- Student exercise books or lined paper
- Language analysis prompt sheet (with sentence stems and terminology)
- Timer or countdown clock visible to all students
Lesson Structure
1. Starter Activity – Engaging Prior Knowledge (5 minutes)
- Pose a quick whole-class question: “What language techniques do you remember from previous lessons? Give examples.”
- Rapid fire brainstorming; record student contributions on the whiteboard categorised as: similes, metaphors, repetition, emotive words, and so on.
- Goal: Activate prior knowledge and build a shared technical vocabulary for analysis.
2. Context and Text Introduction (5 minutes)
- Briefly contextualise the extract: explain it is from Of Mice and Men, focusing on George and Lennie’s relationship and showing an example of Steinbeck’s descriptive style.
- Hand out the extract; read it aloud to the class to ensure access and engagement.
- Prompt reflective listening: “What feelings does Steinbeck evoke here? How?”
3. Modelling Language Analysis (10 minutes)
- Project or write an example paragraph analysing one short sentence from the extract.
- Break down the paragraph structure: method identification, quotation, explanation of effect.
- Use explicit sentence stems, e.g., “Steinbeck uses [language technique] in the phrase ‘...’ to suggest... which makes the reader feel...”
- Highlight connectives for linking ideas such as “this emphasises”, “conveys”, and “creates a sense of”.
4. Guided Group Analysis (15 minutes)
- Divide class into groups of 4-5 students (adjust as necessary; ideally 7 groups).
- Assign each group a different 2-3 sentence section from the extract.
- Task: Identify 3 different language techniques within their section using the prompt sheet. For each, write a brief explanation of the effect on the reader.
- Groups record responses on mini whiteboards or paper; teacher circulates, scaffolds, probes deeper with questions (e.g., “Why do you think Steinbeck chose this word?”).
5. Independent Writing (10 minutes)
- Individually, students write a focused paragraph analysing one language technique from their group’s findings, using the modelled paragraph structure.
- They must include:
- Clear identification of the technique
- Quotation from the extract
- Explanation of impact on the reader (feelings, imagery, tone)
6. Plenary and Assessment (5 minutes)
- Two students volunteer to read their paragraphs aloud.
- Teacher provides immediate formative feedback focused on how well the student explained the effect of the language and used evidence.
- Quick exit ticket: Write one sentence answering “Why is language analysis important for understanding a text at GCSE level?”
- Collect exit tickets for assessment and planning next steps.
Differentiation
- For lower ability learners: Provide sentence starters and visual glossary of language techniques. Optional: pair with a peer for support during group task.
- For higher ability learners: Challenge with an additional mini-task to compare two techniques in their paragraph; explain which has stronger impact and why.
- Extension: Suggest students consider Steinbeck’s purpose or themes hinted at through language.
Assessment
- Formative assessment through group responses and the independent paragraph writing.
- Exit ticket responses measuring student understanding of language analysis purpose.
- Use annotated samples of student paragraphs to track progress on AO2 for GCSE criteria (analysis of language effects).
Creative Twist to Wow Teachers
“Language Detective Challenge”
Transform group work into a detective themed activity: Each group is a “Language Detective Unit” analysing Steinbeck’s clues (language techniques) to solve the “Case of the Reader’s Emotions”. Provide detective badges/stickers and small rewards. This gamifies the analysis process, increasing engagement and collaboration whilst embedding the National Curriculum content rigorously.
This lesson plan commits to precision, stretch and challenge, and clear alignment with KS4 English language curriculum aims, giving students the essential analytical toolkit to excel in exam contexts.