
English • Year 5 • 60 • 30 students • Created with AI following Aligned with New Zealand Curriculum
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This is lesson 23 of 30 in the unit "Procedures and Explanations". Lesson Title: Diagrams and Captions Lesson Description: Week 7, Lesson 23 (60 min). Writing processes: plan how written and visual information will work together. Composition: create a labelled diagram, caption or flow chart that adds information to the explanation rather than merely repeating it. Transcription: practise -ide/cliché spellings, concise captions, punctuation and clear layout.
In this 60-minute lesson, students examine how diagrams, captions and flow charts support an explanation. They plan and create a visual feature that adds new information, while practising concise writing, punctuation, clear layout and the spelling of words such as inside, divide and provide. This builds on prior learning about the structure and language of procedures and explanations.
0–7 min · Hook and notice. Open with the hook and comparison slides showing a short explanation about how a seed becomes a plant, first without a visual and then with a labelled diagram. Ask: “What does the diagram teach us that the words do not?” Students discuss with a partner, then share one observation; the teacher records ideas such as sequence, location, size, change and cause.
7–17 min · Direct teach: adding meaning. Use the teaching slides on diagrams and captions to model an explanation paragraph alongside a diagram. Think aloud while identifying the purpose of each feature: labels name parts, arrows show movement or relationships, a flow chart shows sequence, and a caption explains a detail or result. Compare a repeating caption, “This is a seed,” with an informative caption, “The seed coat protects the embryo until water and warmth allow germination.” Students help improve two further captions using because, so or this means that.
17–25 min · Plan the information. Distribute the diagram and caption planning sheet. Students choose one familiar process, such as how a bee pollinates a flower, how a rainwater tank works, how a shadow forms or how to compost food scraps. They identify the audience and purpose, then plan what the written explanation will say and what the visual will add. Partners check: “Is this information new, or does it simply repeat the words?”
25–43 min · Create a visual feature. Revisit the creation instructions and quality checklist and model a quick flow chart and labelled diagram. Students independently create one visual feature on the worksheet or in their books, including a clear heading, ordered steps or accurately placed labels, arrows where useful, and one to three concise captions. The teacher conferences with students, prompting: “What relationship, change or cause will your visual make easier to understand?”
43–53 min · Edit and peer review. Students swap work with a partner and use the checklist on the peer-review and editing section. Reviewers identify one feature that adds information and ask one clarifying question. Writers edit for precise vocabulary, capital letters, full stops or commas, readable handwriting, spacing and spelling. Pause for a brief word study: students correct and use inside, divide, provide and cliché in short context sentences, noticing that cliché means an overused expression and is not useful when precise wording is available.
53–60 min · Share and exit reflection. Invite three students to display their work and explain how the visual adds meaning. Use the sharing prompts and final checklist to ask: “What can the reader understand faster because of the visual?” and “Which caption gives information the diagram cannot?” Students complete the final reflection on the exit reflection prompt: “My visual adds information by…”, followed by one spelling or layout improvement they made.
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