
English • Year 5 • 60 • 30 students • Created with AI following Aligned with New Zealand Curriculum
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This is lesson 14 of 30 in the unit "Procedures and Explanations". Lesson Title: Publishing a Procedure Lesson Description: Week 5, Lesson 14 (60 min). Writing processes: revise, edit and publish a polished procedural text in print or digital form. Composition: make layout, diagrams and formatting guide the intended audience. Transcription: complete final -ick/homophone checks, present paragraphs accurately and use legible, fluent handwriting.
In this 60-minute lesson, students revise, edit and publish a procedure drafted earlier in the unit. They will improve organisation, audience awareness, layout and visual support, then complete a final transcription check before sharing a polished print or digital text.
0–7 min · Hook and retrieval. Open with the hook and retrieval slides showing two versions of the same procedure: one crowded and difficult to follow, and one clearly formatted. Ask, “Which text would help a new learner succeed, and why?” Students discuss with a partner, then identify useful procedure features from prior lessons: title, goal, materials, ordered steps, precise verbs and safety advice.
7–17 min · Model revising for an audience. Use the model procedure slides to display a short procedure such as How to Make a Paper Spinner. Think aloud while revising one paragraph: combine related ideas, replace vague words such as “thing” or “do” with precise vocabulary, and add a time-order word. Model choosing a clear heading, spacing steps, bolding key verbs and adding a labelled diagram. Students suggest one improvement and explain how it helps the intended audience.
17–25 min · Editing mini-lesson. Display the editing examples in the editing check slides. Model reading aloud slowly and checking capital letters, full stops, paragraph breaks and spelling. Draw attention to final -ick words, such as stick, thick and quick, and commonly confused homophones such as to/two/too, there/their/they’re and your/you’re. Students correct two sample sentences on whiteboards and explain the meaning that confirms the correct homophone.
25–31 min · Plan the publication. Distribute the procedure publishing checklist. Students reread their own draft and mark two revisions they will make before publishing. They choose a suitable format—neat handwriting or digital—and sketch where the title, paragraphs, numbered steps and visual feature will go. Confer briefly with students who need help selecting the most important information or grouping related steps.
31–51 min · Revise, edit and publish. Students produce a polished final procedure using paper or an approved digital tool. The teacher circulates, checking that students are making meaning-focused revisions rather than only correcting spelling. Prompt with: “Who is your audience?”, “Would a reader know what to do next?”, “Which word could be more precise?” Students use the procedure publishing checklist to complete a final check, including paragraph accuracy, -ick spellings, homophones, punctuation, legibility and visual layout. Early finishers quietly proofread a partner’s text, giving one specific warm feedback comment and one actionable suggestion.
51–56 min · Gallery share and response. Display or place completed procedures where partners can read them. Students read one classmate’s text and identify a formatting or visual choice that makes the instructions easier to follow. Invite two students to explain how they designed their procedure for its intended audience.
56–60 min · Exit reflection. Finish with the Success Criteria exit ticket slips. Students indicate which criteria they met, name one change that improved their procedure, and identify one editing check they will remember next time. Collect the slips and published texts for assessment.
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