📝 Part 1: Text Analysis and Planning

Writing Prompt: "Write a persuasive essay arguing whether social media has a positive or negative impact on young people's mental health. Use specific examples and evidence to support your position."

My position: Social media has a _____________ impact on young people's mental health.

🗂️ Part 2: Essay Structure and Organisation

Introduction:

Hook/Opening statement: _________________________________________________

Thesis statement: ____________________________________________________

Body Paragraph 1 - Main Argument:

Topic sentence: _____________________________________________________

Supporting evidence/example: __________________________________________

Body Paragraph 2 - Additional Support:

Topic sentence: _____________________________________________________

Supporting evidence/example: __________________________________________

Conclusion:

Restate thesis and summarise main points: ____________________________

✍️ Part 3: Language and Writing Techniques

Weak: "Some people think social media is bad."

Strong: ___________________________________________________

Weak: "Young people use social media a lot."

Strong: ___________________________________________________

📖 Part 4: Writing Practice

🔍 Part 5: Self-Assessment and Editing

"Social media effects young peoples mental health in many different way's and this is a serious issue that need to be addressed."

Corrected sentence: