🌟 Part 1: Adding Descriptive Words

Example: "I went to the beach." → "I went to the sunny, golden beach."

a) I saw a bird.

b) We ate ice cream.

c) The water was cold.

The _______ waves _______ crashed against the _______ rocks.

🔗 Part 2: Combining Sentences

Example: "I saw a dog. It was running." → "I saw a dog running quickly through the park."

a) We went swimming. The pool was warm.

b) My family had a picnic. We sat under a tree.

c) I built a sandcastle. It was very tall.

Original: "We ate lunch. It was delicious."

📝 Part 3: Paragraph Organisation

_____ The sand was warm between my toes and the waves splashed gently.

_____ My favourite day of the holidays was when we visited Takapuna Beach.

_____ We built an enormous sandcastle with towers and a moat around it.

_____ It was the perfect day and I can't wait to go back next summer.

👥 Part 4: Peer Feedback Practice

"I went to the park. I played on the swings. I had fun. Then I went home."

✨ Part 5: Sensory Details

At the beach, I could see _____________, hear _____________, and feel _____________.

🎯 Part 6: Your Writing Revision

Include: descriptive words, combined sentences, and sensory details