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Peer Review Travel Writing

Read the travel extract, then review it as a thoughtful editor. Be specific, kind and useful: praise a clear strength, explain its effect, and suggest one practical improvement. Finally, plan how you would use feedback on your own writing.

A morning in Whitby

At six o’clock, the harbour was still half asleep. Fishing boats rocked gently against the quay, their ropes tapping the wood like impatient fingers. A gull swooped past with a sharp cry, and the air smelled of salt and warm bread from a bakery turning on its ovens. I followed the steep, cobbled lane towards the abbey. Each step brought a brighter view: red roofs, grey sea and a strip of pale gold sky. At the top, the wind tugged at my jacket. I leaned on the stone wall and watched the first sunlight spill across the water. For a moment, the town seemed to belong only to me.

1.Choose the strongest explanation.
  • It names several locations in one paragraph.
  • It combines a journey with sensory details and the narrator’s reactions.
  • It gives directions using numbers.
  • It explains the history of every building.
2.Quote one detail that appeals to a sense other than sight, and name the sense it appeals to.
3.What does the simile “their ropes tapping the wood like impatient fingers” help the reader imagine?
4.How does the writer help the reader follow the narrator’s route through Whitby?
5.The extract is vivid, but the reader does not learn what the narrator did after watching the sunrise. Which suggestion would best help the writer develop the ending?
  • Add a detail about what the narrator did next or how the moment changed their plans.
  • Replace every descriptive word with a shorter word.
  • Add a list of unrelated towns.
  • Remove the final sentence because it expresses a feeling.
6.Give the writer two different strengths. For each, refer to a word, phrase or moment from the extract and explain why it works for a reader.
7.Write one kind, focused improvement suggestion about the ending. Make it specific enough for the writer to act on.
8.Rewrite “I walked up the hill and looked at the sea” to make it more vivid. Include one sensory detail and keep the meaning clear.
9.True or false: “This is boring” is useful peer feedback because it tells the writer exactly what to change.
TrueFalse
10.Rewrite “Your description is bad” as a respectful, specific suggestion that could help the writer improve.
11.Imagine this is your own travel writing. Name one change you would make after this review and explain how it would improve the piece.

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  • Peer Review Travel Writing, page 1 of 3: A morning in Whitby

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  • Peer Review Travel Writing, page 2 of 3: 5. The extract is vivid, but the reader does not learn what the narrator did after…

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  • Peer Review Travel Writing, page 3 of 3: 11. Imagine this is your own travel writing. Name one change you would make after this…

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