Essay Peer Review Feedback

Name:

Date:

Author's Name:

📝 Part 1: Strengths and Content

1. What is the strongest aspect of this essay? (Tick one)

Clear thesis statement and argument

Strong use of textual evidence

Engaging introduction that hooks the reader

Logical paragraph structure and flow

2. Complete this sentence about the essay's content:

The most convincing part of your argument is ________________________

_____________________________________________________________

because _________________________________________________

3. How well does the essay explore the theme "From Innocence to Experience"?

Excellent - clearly shows character transformation

Good - some evidence of change or growth

Satisfactory - theme is mentioned but needs development

Needs improvement - theme is unclear or missing

4. One specific example or piece of evidence that works really well is:

🔧 Part 2: Structure and Language Improvements

5. Which areas need the most improvement? (Tick all that apply)

Paragraph structure and topic sentences

Transitions between paragraphs (cohesion devices)

Complex sentence structures

Formal academic tone and style

Conclusion that reinforces the argument

6. Complete this feedback about paragraph structure:

To improve paragraph _____, you could strengthen the topic sentence by

_____________________________________________________________

This would help because ____________________________________

7. Identify one sentence that could be improved and suggest a revision:

Original sentence: ___________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

Suggested revision: ___________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

📚 Part 3: Grammar and Metalanguage Feedback

8. Which grammatical features does the writer use effectively? (Tick all that apply)

Complex sentences with subordinate clauses

Varied sentence openers and structures

Appropriate use of modality (might, could, should)

Cohesion devices (however, furthermore, in contrast)

Consistent formal register

9. Complete this grammar-focused feedback using metalanguage:

Your use of _________________ is effective because it _______________

_____________________________________________________________

To improve clarity, consider using more ________________________

instead of ________________________________________________

10. One specific grammar goal for revision:

Focus on improving ________________________________________

by _____________________________________________________

11. Overall, this essay demonstrates:

Strong control of complex grammar and sophisticated style

Good grammar with some areas for refinement

Basic grammar that needs attention to sentence variety

Grammar issues that interfere with meaning

12. Final encouragement and next steps:

What I enjoyed most about reading your essay: ___________________

_____________________________________________________________

My main suggestion for your next draft: _________________________

_____________________________________________________________

Essay Peer Review Feedback

Essay Peer Review Feedback

📝 Part 1: Strengths and Content

🔧 Part 2: Structure and Language Improvements

📚 Part 3: Grammar and Metalanguage Feedback

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