Fate vs Free Will Peer Review Checklist

Name:

Date:

Peer's Name:

🎬 Part 1: Content & Ideas

1. Does the draft clearly explore the theme of Fate vs Free Will in film?

Very clear - I understand the main argument

Mostly clear - some parts need clarification

Unclear - needs more focus on the theme

2. Are specific film examples and evidence used effectively?

Uses specific scenes or characters as examples

Explains how examples support the argument

Includes film techniques (camera, sound, etc.)

Needs more evidence from the film

3. What is the strongest part of this draft?

4. One thing I wonder about or would like to know more about:

📝 Part 2: Organisation & Language

5. How well is the writing organised?

Clear introduction, body, and conclusion

Good structure but some parts could be reordered

Needs better organisation and flow

6. Is the language clear and appropriate for the topic?

Uses appropriate film and literary terminology

Sentences are clear and easy to follow

Grammar and spelling are mostly correct

Some sentences need clarification

7. Two specific suggestions to improve this draft:

Suggestion 1: _________________________________

Suggestion 2: _________________________________

⭐ Part 3: Feedback Summary

8. Overall, this draft shows understanding of Fate vs Free Will because:

9. Extension Activity: For advanced learners - identify one deeper thematic connection or ethical question this draft raises about fate and free will:

Success Criteria Checklist - Did I:

Explain what I like about my peer's draft and why?

Give clear suggestions to improve structure, language, or ideas?

Provide respectful and constructive feedback?

Focus on the theme of Fate vs Free Will in my comments?

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