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Parody Peer Review

Read the draft below as if a classmate wrote it. Use evidence from the text in your answers. Be specific, respectful and useful: explain what is working, identify one priority for revision, and suggest how to address it. The sample answers are models; your own justified responses may differ.

Draft for review: The Netball Tournament Improvement Plan

NOTICE 47B: Optimising the Netball Experience The committee is pleased to announce a streamlined process for the upcoming netball tournament. To improve the flow of play, all players must complete a pre-match form confirming that they are, in fact, players. Please submit this form to the table official, who will return it for correction if your handwriting suggests you may be a ball. Each team should appoint one player to monitor the scoreboard. This player must not look at the scoreboard while monitoring it, as direct observation may influence the result. A second player will record the score from memory after the match. If the two scores differ, the team with the more confident recorder will be considered correct. For fairness, all teams will receive the same number of opportunities to score. These opportunities will be distributed equally, except in cases where the ball goes through the ring. In that situation, the scoring team will be asked to explain how it happened and whether they had prior permission. Dylan has suggested that the committee simply let the game proceed and keep score as it happens. This proposal has been referred to a subcommittee, which will report back after the tournament. Charlie has requested clarification about whether players may pass the ball. The committee appreciates this question and confirms that passing remains under review. Evie asked whether the rules might be easier to understand if written in plain English. The committee recognises the value of clarity and has formed a working group to consider a draft of a possible plain-English policy. Until then, please consult this notice, the separate notice explaining this notice, and the official who is currently trying to find the correct form. We look forward to a successful tournament, subject to completion of all required paperwork.

1.What real-world habit, system or attitude does the draft appear to satirise? Support your interpretation with one detail from the draft.
2.Which technique is most clearly used when the draft says the score will be decided by whichever team has the “more confident recorder”? Choose one and explain its effect.
  • Understatement: making a serious problem sound smaller
  • Exaggeration: pushing an absurd idea beyond reasonable limits
  • Realism: presenting a likely scoring method
  • Direct address: speaking to the reader as “you”
3.How does the formal notice style create contrast with the ridiculous rules? Refer to a phrase that helps establish this voice.
4.Does the draft build its comic effect effectively from beginning to end? Explain how one later detail develops or weakens the earlier ideas.
5.True or false: The draft’s main criticism is that netball players cannot understand ordinary rules.
TrueFalse
6.Does the humour mainly punch up at a system or punch down at a group with less power? Give one reason for your judgement.
7.Write one peer-review comment naming a successful moment and explaining why it works. Avoid general comments such as “It is funny.”
8.Identify one specific revision that could strengthen the parody’s clarity or comic impact. Explain what the writer could change and why.
9.Which ending best extends the draft’s parody without changing its target? Choose one.
  • The players decide that committees are always useless.
  • The committee announces a form to request permission to begin the tournament.
  • A player misses a shot and is mocked by the crowd.
  • The tournament becomes a serious story about winning.
10.Write one question you would ask the writer to help them make a deliberate revision. Your question should invite a decision, not simply ask whether they like the draft.

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