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Essay Introduction Drafting

A student magazine is publishing short film-response essays. Use the mini-brief and model below to plan, evaluate and draft an introduction that draws readers in and presents a clear argument. You may use the supplied film brief or a film you know well.

The film-response brief

Invented film: *The Last Lighthouse*. During a storm, 13-year-old Moana discovers that the abandoned lighthouse can still send a signal. She must persuade a divided coastal town to work together before a ferry reaches the dangerous rocks. The story explores courage, community and speaking up.

What makes an introduction work?

A strong introduction often moves from a hook that suits the topic, to brief context, then to a thesis: a specific, arguable main idea. The thesis should answer the essay question and may preview the reasons the essay will develop.

1.Which sentence is the clearest thesis for an essay answering: “How does *The Last Lighthouse* show the importance of community?”

The film is about a lighthouse and a storm.
Community is important in many places.
Through the town’s shared rescue effort, the film suggests that courage grows when people listen to one another and act together.
In this essay I will discuss the film.

2.Read this draft: “What would you do if a single light could save a town? In *The Last Lighthouse*, Moana finds a way to signal a ferry during a storm. The film shows that teamwork matters.” Identify the hook and explain briefly why it could engage a reader.

3.The draft ends, “The film is really good and has lots of exciting parts.” Name one reason this is weak as a thesis and rewrite it as a specific, arguable claim about the film’s message.

4.Put these introduction moves in the most effective order by writing 1, 2 and 3 beside them: thesis; hook; brief context introducing the film and situation.

Thesis
Hook
Brief context introducing the film and situation

Plan and draft

Choose the supplied film or a film you know well. Keep your hook connected to your argument; avoid unrelated facts or a generic opening such as “Since the beginning of time”.

5.Write the essay question you will answer about your chosen film. Make it focused enough to answer in one essay.

6.Draft two different possible hooks for your essay question: one question, vivid image or moment; and one surprising idea or contrast. Label each type.

7.Write a thesis that answers your essay question with a clear, arguable claim. If useful, preview one or two reasons that support it.

8.Draft your full introduction in about 4–6 sentences. Include a purposeful hook, brief film context and your thesis; make the ideas flow rather than listing the parts.

9.Revise your introduction: underline the thesis, then improve one sentence for precision or flow. In one sentence, explain what you changed and why.