🎯 Success Criteria

By the end of this worksheet, I can:

☐ Explain how pronouns and synonyms link ideas in a paragraph

☐ Replace repeated nouns with appropriate pronouns or synonyms

☐ Write sentences that flow well and connect ideas clearly

📚 Part 1: Identifying Cohesion

1. Read this choppy paragraph. Circle the repeated noun that makes it sound awkward:

"The kiwi bird is unique to New Zealand. The kiwi bird has no wings. The kiwi bird hunts at night. The kiwi bird uses its long beak to find food."

2. Which pronoun could replace "the kiwi bird" in the second sentence?

They

It

He

She

3. Which synonym could replace "kiwi bird" to add variety?

This creature

The building

My friend

The car

4. Rewrite the kiwi paragraph using pronouns and synonyms to improve the flow:

✏️ Part 2: Creating Cohesion

5. Fill in the blanks with appropriate pronouns or synonyms:

"Sarah loves playing rugby. _______ trains every Tuesday and Thursday. The sport helps _______ stay fit and make friends. Rugby has taught _______ about teamwork."

6. Improve this paragraph by replacing repeated words. Cross out repetitive nouns and write better alternatives above them:

"The All Blacks won the match. The All Blacks played brilliantly. The team celebrated after the game. The team thanked their supporters. The supporters cheered loudly for the team."

7. Write 3-4 sentences about your favourite hobby or sport. Use pronouns and synonyms to connect your ideas smoothly:

8. Check your writing above. Tick the boxes that apply:

I used pronouns to avoid repetition

I used synonyms to add variety

My sentences flow smoothly

My ideas connect clearly