Story Feedback Practice Worksheet

Name:

Date:

📝 Part 1: Understanding Story Feedback

1. What makes good story feedback? Tick all that apply:

Focuses on specific writing elements

Is clear and easy to understand

Only mentions what's wrong

Helps the writer improve

2. Which feedback sentence is most helpful for a Papamoa Hills story?

"Your story is good."

"Your vivid description of Papamoa Hills creates a clear setting, and varying your sentence lengths would make the adventure even more exciting to read."

"You made lots of mistakes."

✏️ Part 2: Writing Feedback Sentences

Example Feedback: "Your authentic voice shines through when describing the climb up Papamoa Hills, and adding more varied sentence structures would help control the pace of your adventure story."

3. Read this story excerpt about Papamoa Hills, then write one feedback sentence focusing on setting and voice:

"I love going to papamoa hills. It is fun. We climbed up. It was hard. The view was good."

4. For the same story excerpt, write one feedback sentence focusing on sentence variety and punctuation:

5. Write a feedback sentence that mentions one strength and one area for improvement about tense control: