Peer Feedback Prompts

Name:

Date:

🌟 Part 1: Positive Feedback Starters

1. Choose the best positive feedback starter for your partner's alternate ending:

"I really liked how your ending showed..."

"Your character development was effective because..."

"The way you changed the theme of fate vs. free will was..."

"Your use of [literary device] helped me understand..."

2. Complete this positive comment about your partner's work:

The most interesting change you made to the original ending was _________________________________ because _________________________________.

3. Highlight what worked well (tick all that apply):

Clear narrative structure

Strong character development

Effective use of literary devices

Clear shift in fate vs. free will theme

Engaging dialogue or description

🤔 Part 2: Constructive Suggestions

4. Use these sentence starters to offer helpful suggestions:

Choose one:

• "I wonder if you could develop _____________ more by..."

• "Have you considered showing how _____________ affects..."

• "It might be interesting to explore _____________ because..."

• "One area that could be strengthened is _____________ by..."

5. Questions to help your partner think deeper:

"How does your ending change the main character's journey?"

"What does your ending suggest about fate vs. free will?"

"Which characters have more control in your version?"

"How might the audience feel differently about your ending?"

6. Complete this suggestion for improvement:

To make your alternate ending even stronger, you could _________________________________. This would help readers understand _________________________________ better.

📝 Part 3: Reflection & Extension

7. After giving feedback, reflect on what you learned:

8. Extension for Advanced Learners: Suggest a multimedia element:

Your alternate ending would work well as a _________________ because _________________. The key visual or audio element should be _________________ to emphasise the theme of _________________.

9. Success Criteria Check - Did your partner's draft:

Create a clear alternate ending that changes the original story?

Show deliberate language choices that affect tone or theme?

Demonstrate how the ending shifts fate vs. free will themes?

Use effective literary devices or narrative techniques?

10. One thing I will apply to my own writing after this feedback session: