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Shakespeare Essay Final Draft

Plan, review and polish a literary essay about tragic love in a Shakespeare play. Use your own essay draft and evidence from the play you have studied. Work through the activities, then write a final-draft introduction. Use the checklist to guide revisions; there can be more than one effective response.

Shape your argument

Choose the play and form a focused argument. A thesis should make a claim that can be supported with evidence, not just name a topic.

1.Select the play your essay analyses: Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth, Hamlet, Othello, or another Shakespeare play you have studied. Write the title and one tragic relationship, conflict or choice that matters in it.

2.Turn this broad topic into a debatable thesis: “tragic love in Romeo and Juliet”. Include Shakespeare’s message or an idea about how the tragedy develops.

3.For your chosen play, note two moments or quotations that could support your thesis. For each, identify the speaker or situation and explain briefly what it could show. Check wording and act/scene details against the play.

Review and revise

A strong analytical paragraph connects a claim, evidence and explanation. Review a partner’s draft respectfully, or use the criteria to review your own.

4.Read this sample paragraph: “Shakespeare presents love as powerful in Romeo and Juliet. The lovers marry despite their families’ conflict. This choice shows their devotion, but it also places them in greater danger because they act without resolving the feud. Shakespeare therefore connects private love with the destructive consequences of public hatred.” Which sentence most clearly explains what the evidence suggests?

“Shakespeare presents love as powerful in Romeo and Juliet.”
“The lovers marry despite their families’ conflict.”
“This choice shows their devotion, but it also places them in greater danger because they act without resolving the feud.”
“Shakespeare therefore connects private love with the destructive consequences of public hatred.”

5.Use the sample paragraph above. Identify one strength and suggest one specific improvement. Consider the link between claim, evidence and analysis, or whether a precise quotation would strengthen it.

6.Match each revision strategy to its main purpose.

1. Add a transition between ideas
2. Explain what a quotation reveals
3. Revise a broad thesis
4. Include a relevant quotation

B. Help the reader follow the argument
A. Make the central claim more precise
C. Connect evidence to the argument
D. Support a point with textual evidence

7.Revise this weak thesis to make it more specific and arguable: “Romeo and Juliet is about love and families.”

Polish your writing

Literary analysis usually discusses the action of a play in the present tense. Proofread for accurate quotations, clear sentences and formal expression.

8.Choose the most effective way to introduce the quotation in a literary essay: “To be, or not to be: that is the question” (Hamlet, 3.1).

Shakespeare writes: “To be, or not to be: that is the question”.
As Hamlet weighs whether to endure suffering, he asks, “To be, or not to be: that is the question” (3.1).
“To be, or not to be: that is the question” is said by Hamlet.

9.Rewrite this sentence in literary present tense and correct its spelling: “Shakespear showed how the feud caused the lovers to make a dangerous choice.”

10.Before submitting, mark each item as checked or still to revise in your own draft: thesis is clear; each paragraph makes a point; evidence is accurate and introduced; analysis explains evidence; ideas flow logically; conclusion returns to the argument; spelling, punctuation and sentence boundaries are checked.

Write and reflect

Draft an introduction for your essay. Aim to orient the reader to the play, present a focused thesis and preview the main line of argument. Use the space to plan a polished paragraph.

11.Write your final-draft introduction for an essay about tragic love in your chosen Shakespeare play. Include the play and playwright, a focused thesis, and a brief indication of the ideas your essay will develop.

12.Name one revision you made or plan to make, and explain how it will help a reader understand your argument.