📝 Part 1: Editing Skills Practice

1. Which editing technique helps readers understand your story better?

Making sentences longer

Checking sentences make sense

Adding more characters

Using bigger words

2. What should you check when editing for clarity? (Tick all that apply)

Do sentences make sense?

Are words clear and vivid?

Do ideas flow smoothly?

Is the handwriting neat?

3. Which linking words help improve story flow?

Then, after that, because

Big, small, round

Red, blue, green

Happy, sad, angry

4. Read this sentence: "We went to camp it was fun we played games." How could you improve it?

✏️ Part 2: Story Editing Practice

5. Edit this camp story paragraph. Circle words that could be improved and add linking words where needed:

We arrived at camp. We put up our tents. It was hard. We cooked

dinner. The food was good. We told stories. We went to bed.

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6. What is one specific editing goal you could set for your own camp story?

My editing goal: I will improve my story by _________________________________

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7. When giving feedback to a classmate, which comment is most helpful?

"Your story is good"

"This sentence doesn't make sense - maybe try adding 'because' here"

"I don't like it"

"It's too long"

🎯 Part 3: Reflection

8. Complete this editing checklist for your own camp story:

Do all my sentences make sense?

Have I used clear, vivid words?

Do my ideas flow smoothly with linking words?

Will my audience understand and enjoy my story?

9. What editing strategy helped you most today?

10. Write one sentence about your camp story that you improved through editing:

Before editing: ____________________________________________

After editing: _____________________________________________

Camp Story Editing

Camp Story Editing

📝 Part 1: Editing Skills Practice

✏️ Part 2: Story Editing Practice

🎯 Part 3: Reflection

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