Mauo Story Feedback Task

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Date:

📖 Part 1: Understanding Story Feedback

1. What are the key areas we focus on when giving feedback on stories? Tick all that apply:

Authentic voice (does it sound like the writer?)

Narrative clarity (is the story clear and easy to follow?)

Sentence structure (are sentences well-formed?)

Punctuation and capitalisation

Tense control (staying in past, present, or future)

2. Good feedback should be:

Only positive comments

Specific and helpful

Very long and detailed

Only about spelling mistakes

✍️ Part 2: Example Feedback

3. Read this example of good feedback for a Mauo story:

"Your story about Mauo has a strong authentic voice that draws the reader in, though watching your tense control (switching between 'climbed' and 'climbs') and adding more specific details about the mountain's appearance would make your narrative even clearer."

4. What makes this feedback helpful? Write one reason:

5. In the example above, which two main areas does the feedback address?

Area 1: ___________________ Area 2: ___________________

📝 Part 3: Writing Your Feedback

6. Now read your partner's Mauo story. Write ONE clear feedback sentence that addresses at least two of these areas: authentic voice, narrative clarity, sentence structure, punctuation/capitalisation, or tense control.

Remember: Start with something positive, then give one specific suggestion for improvement.

7. Which two areas did you focus on in your feedback?

Area 1: ___________________ Area 2: ___________________