📋 Part 1: Peer Review Checklist

Critical Lens Analysis:

Essay Structure and Cohesion:

Strength: _________________________________________________

Area for improvement: ______________________________________

✏️ Part 2: Grammar Workshop - Cohesion and Referencing

Extract A: "Mr Birling represents capitalism. He fires Eva Smith. This shows class conflict. It demonstrates Priestley's critique."

Improved version: ________________________________________

Extract B: "The Inspector interrogates the family, he reveals their guilt, this creates dramatic tension."

Improved version: ________________________________________

a) The Birling family represents the bourgeoisie, _____________ Eva Smith symbolises the oppressed working class.

b) Priestley critiques capitalism through Mr Birling's actions. _____________, he also challenges the audience's complacency.

c) The Inspector's arrival disrupts the celebration _____________ it forces the characters to confront their moral failures.

🎯 Part 3: Marxist Lens Analysis Levels

My essay currently demonstrates _____________ level analysis because:

a) The most significant improvement I made today was: ____________________

b) To reach a higher level of analysis, I need to: ________________________

c) Before final submission, I must: ___________________________________